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for The Viper's bite

by Malestorm

person Verbatim
schedule January 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I can not wait for Paula to give Ky'an a child that would be the ultimate sign of acceptance. I love this story and can not wait for more!
person lil'bit
schedule January 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can hardly wait for more. You have written an Awesome chapter! This is BY FAR my favorite Pred fic. Love it!!
person Edison
schedule January 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your story is the type of story that I read in front of a roaring fire with hot cocoa! I can not stop reading this it is beautiful and I love it. Love stories are my favorite things to read and write about you do it so Magnificently and effortlessly.

I am going to print it out and read it now! Ajax email me
person Greyson
schedule January 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh the last line was perfect!. You have teased us so and now she has Finally given in
and I am excited for the next chapter. This chapter was Excellent
person Private persons
schedule January 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ky'an and Paula finally getting to the heart of the matter. Awesome. I do not think Se'tra will be quiet for long. This is my night reading I love it. Now make the next chapter just as AWESOME!
person Allure
schedule January 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am so happy that you updated and this update is excellent!. I love Ky'an and Paula doing ANYTHING!! lol. Finally she gives in and I am happy that he wants to be her first and only. Awesome writing.
person Della Bear
schedule January 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhhhh! Lovely, Ky'an and Paula finally allowing naturre to take its course and I can not wait!
I do not think Se'tra will be able to contain her jealousy even if Jake'her threatened her with death. She knows what she has lost and she wants it back.
This is awesome and you are too; keep it going forever Blu!
person aquamum
schedule January 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another hot chapter - excellent
person Symetrical break
schedule January 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YES! Finally Ky'an and Paula are getting together. I love the way you write them together, talking, touching or just looking at each other. You are amazing. I love this continue
schedule January 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome! I can not wait for the next chapter Blu!. I love this story it keeps me hanging around here so you keep writing because you are Awesome at it.