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for The Viper's bite

by Malestorm

person wydow
schedule January 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is beautiful stuff. Ky'an and Puala getting closer. I like their interactions both vocal and physical. You are good at that I think *smiles* If I could rate this twice I would. Absolutely Lovely

Hey I tried to rate it once but it did not work. I am at Kraven's house so that might be the reason you can not rate it twice no matter the author.

person shortest_warrior
schedule January 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You are wicked. Damn Cliffies. Love it, need more please.
person Crazytail
schedule January 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
PERFECTION. That was AWESOME. I love it that he wants her to say what they both know is true. I also love it that he wants to be her first and only. You are amazing Blu! NEXT CHAPTER!
person Myliana
schedule January 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love the interaction between Paula and Ky'an. I think it is so beautiful. Love that he wants to be her first and only. Perfect. I Absolutely love this story and can not wait for you to update it. Amazing writing
person Millen Stryker
schedule January 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I guess Paula is finally giving in. Things are definitely heating up... in a big way.

Serves Se'tra right! She's been given a fate far worse than death! Still, she should get her just desserts.
person Deverwood
schedule January 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Paula has finally accepted the fact that Ky'an is everything that she wanted and need in a man.

I love that Ky'an said he would be her first and only. Loved it and good to see and know Lol
Se'tra's fate will tear her apart and I wonder if her jealousy is greater than her fear of Jake'her
I can hardly wait to for the next chapter. Awesome, trully awesome writing Blu.
person LovyDovy
schedule January 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The hunger and aching all so sexy! I love it. Paula can't eny all that masculine packaging. Setra will be out for blood. Thanks for updating regularly lately. Stop teasing already. More love and romance...you know bonding. Great predfic angst and author.
person bodydouble
schedule January 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I did not think anyone could take an age old romantic theme of girl leaves guy for richer man; guy takes another girl to make first girl jealous but instead falls for the new girl. However, you have done that with awesome results.

I Love this story; and the fact that you write it with such passion and beautiful words says to me that you love it too. I want to thank you for writing this , you have the gift and you use it with excellence.
person Mackrel
schedule January 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You evoke emotion into the reader and that is an awesome thing to accomplish.

I love that Ky'an wants everything about Paula for himself and wants her to make the decision to beg for it rather than for him to take it.

Wounded animals always attack when cornered. Se'tra will not lose to an Ooman, I would beware.

Love and Romance Yuatja stlye is Awesome
person evoD
schedule January 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I had to chapter nine that I missed. but *sighs* I am in love with this story. So she is FINALLY going to give him what he wants. *runs around the room with scissors* You are so good at writing passion. Lovely!!!