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for The Viper's bite

by Malestorm

person INC
schedule January 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YES!!! I love it.I love it!!! This soooo wonderful to read. I salivate for more. It is so beautiful. Just like Ky'an Strength, honor, and passion.
person Novicegirl
schedule January 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It will not let me rate this I would give it a TEN!!

Paula fianlly giving in!!! Now that he knows why she was resisting him some what I think He will take it easy with her....maybe not to easy lol. I love this. It just flows like a river. PLEASE more.
person chancelor22
schedule January 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OOOOOOO! Shivers... I so cannot wait to see what the next chapter holds...Keep up the great work! =)
person Coreena
schedule January 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am trembling and I am happy so happy you are writing. This story is the best! I love it. I can not get enough and I am going to read the entire thing again after I finish this review!!
person Bee
schedule January 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank goodness that you are still allowing reviews from people who are not logged in! I would be very sad if I couldn't tell you how awesome that chapter was! So Ky'an wants her to choose him to be her first and only one. I like that! It's much more clever then him forcing his way with her. And the last line was fantastic. I cannot wait until the next chapter! And I cannot wait for Paula to have Ky'an's child. I think he would be so happy and very protective of her.
person Verbatim
schedule January 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww Blu...I am not going to say it because you know what I am going to say. This is a beaut!! More
person LovyDovy
schedule January 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, but I can hardly wait for another chappie. Please let us or rather Paula have some Kyan already. If she won't beg I will Kyan baby! So sexy-ug you warrior you.

Enough with the stories disappearing. Please keep going cause I need this!

Missing my other warrior favs...Liakon, Wren, Bay, Samsun etc. (sighs)Honored Lorna please bring them all back...I'm dying here. Viper's bite is keeping me alive, but I hate not knowing what is going to happen. Pleeeaaasssee.

Whats with the electronsiggy thingy? I mean why every time I visit? Feel like Big brother reading my diary or somethin'.
schedule January 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon
schedule January 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am working on it as I type well not right now I am typing Heh. The Viper will be up this week Promise! Bluflame
person Khale
schedule January 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have to say you are a loevely writer. I love this story more and more everytime I read it. I can not wait for you to update. Please make it soon! William