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for The Viper's bite

by Malestorm

schedule January 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your writing is so wonderful I absolutely love it. You write Passion so well that I am jealous.

This story is my favorite Predator fiction it is like a romance, hell it is a romance Yautja stlye! lol More please Iit is trully AWESOME!

Are you going to write more?
person Parts
schedule January 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am glad you stayed Blu!

I would really cry if you left. You are my reading on my lunch hour. I love this beautiful piece of writing you have on display here.

Although a few misguided souls are blaming you guys for this mess. 99.9% of us know better and that you guys DID NOTHING WRONG. This is like talking to a rape victim and it is SAD
schedule January 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
As usual AWESOME writing Blu continue on no mattter what.

BTW I read some rant where some people are complaining about having to log in. SO WHAT!!!! Isn't it amazing how people do not care about something until it happens to them. Let this guy start trolling or stalking (as Fadeaway Blond refers to it) in their neck of the woods and see how fast their attitudes changes. SELFISH just selfish. They act like they have to give up a rib or something. I do not understand. I saw the carnage; I got emails from Lorna and Spider; that crap aint right and NO ONE should have to put up with that kind of ABUSE. LOG in and HELP stop it.
Sorry for the rant. Love this Blu I AM HAPPY YOU STAYED!!!
schedule January 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love this story, really hope to read more soon. the editing helped the reading be more comfortable
schedule January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You had better continue this. We can not update all we want to do is read your story becasue it is excellent. Passion and Hottness just smoking off the screen . You are a master.

btw
If The Viper and Wolf got into a fight who do you think would win?
person Azon
schedule January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like your writing style. I can't wait for the next installment.
person AdamIam
schedule January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Blu this is awesome Story wise, writing, and Flow. I can not stop reading it( you know that good book thing) I am so glad Ky'an came to his senses and realized there was something better to do then waste his time on Se'tra. Beautiful writing. MORE!
person aquamum
schedule January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm new to your story - it's great !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Enought with the sexual tension please - it's killing me.........

person Symetrical Break
schedule January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another sizzling and Powerful chapter. All this tension will break won't it. soon.
Give me more I love this Yautja ROmance !
person Softly
schedule January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad you weathered the storm and all is at peace once again but this story is ON FIRE. You have to get us through this set back Will she heal quickly so Ky'an can say to her once again. "You know you want it." LOL GREAT GREAT AWESOME WRITING!!!