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for The Viper's bite

by Malestorm

person Amari
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Passionate and powerful that is Ky'an. Love the interation with he and Paula. *tingles* It will be even more akward for Paula because she is starting to feel more than like for Ky'an. Love the scene after Ky'an realized he should be with Paula instead of wasting his time with Se'tra. Beautiful job. Bring it on I am waiting.
person INC
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
All I want is more. I can not stop reading this because it is Too good. You know that don't you. It's okay because I think it is Marvelous!
person Novicegirl
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oneof the few stories that I can read over and over with out feeling disinterested or unfulfilled. You just KNOW how to write. this is trully a masterful job. BRAVO BEllA
person Fadeaway Blond
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
If I could give you ten stars I would. This is just so Sensual, sexy. erotic, Passionate, Humorous, Action, Love, Lustful and Addictive story I LOVE to read. EXCELLENT writing
person RedWine
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Incase you wish to start an email list here is mine. (no pressure just a suggestion) heee
person Mackrel
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
See you are spectacular. I am in awe and I trully can not wait for more from you. Just freaking spectacular!
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Blu I love the way you write. Your story is so addictive as some have said. I can hardly wait until the Ky'Pa happens. You are totally my favorite author.

btw
Are you writing anymore after this story?
person karmaxp
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ky'an is so damn Sexy and Powerful and IN LOVE with Paula. You do not mess with HIS MATE. I guess Se'tra knows that now. You are a Magnificent writer and I anxiously sit here waiting for you to update quicker!!!
person Keen
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great job Blu. I particularly liked the set up leading to the fighting. The casual mention of the heavy sculpture was a nice touch.
I must be off to read the previous chapters now that I am sufficiently hooked.

Cheers,
Cam
person Granite
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
He can not give her up I do not care if he regrets brining her on board the ship. HE loves her or likes her very much. but I don't think you try to kill someone over like.

You are working this masterpiece!!

I need a heads up when you post again. I left my email for ya!