rate_review Reviews

God this story just keeps getting better and better. *sigh* I love all the interaction beteen Kyan and Paula though it seems that Paula is still fighting her feelings for him, not that I think she can resist that sexy hunter. Remember Kyan always get's what he wants. *wink*
Setra sucks! I wish Kyan had finished her off.
Love your story, keep the chapters coming!

Are we updating today?

It kicked me out but MANN!!!! Oh you let it all hang out!!!! This was thrillingly , exciting, Sexy and AWESOME WRITING! and I LOVE IT. SE'tra DESERVES what she got and more. Ky'an oh how I love him. Calm but deadly. The last scene was so touching I love it I love this. Okay I'll stop saying that. IS he going to regret bringing her there now? I need an update. BEAUTIFUl!!

Priceless piece of work!!!! What was she thinking that he would not do anything to her. It is his PAULA. I loved the surge of emotions when he saw her tears. I loved everything about this. You keep me glued to the screen. it is a work os Excellence.

Oh yeah LOVED the end scene. PRICELESS

Oh my oh my this is what can I say other than AWESOME. Se'tra knows he wants Paula and does what she does chaos havoc and pain. I was amazed at Ky'an's reaction to kill her I guess he feels something for Paula.LOL. Blu if I may call you that. UPDATE!

I am ready for more. You make the tingling flow My dearie! I was blown away by this chapter. I am so glad Paula made and awesome come back to Se'tra. Lovely writing. Tender scene at the end I LOVED IT! Now What will Ky'an be thinking? She is hurt and if he had not brought her there none of this would have happened? MAYBE! chapter 10!

I am sooooo engrossed in this story don't ever take time off or I will go through withdrawal like a junkie. This is fanstaic writing Bluflame I am absolutely printing it out and reading it at work!!!

I ABSOLUTELY LOVE YOUR STORY! ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS STORY!

AS usual you make my night and day with your writing. This is absolutely Beautiful to me.You got it all here and leave me wanting MORE! You do it so effortlessly. Keep going!!!!

YOU ARE MY IDOL!!!

Isn't is just like someone not to want what they have until he or she has someone else. Se'tra realizing that too late and doing something very dangerous to her health like harming Paula. I mean he warned her.
Love this, absolutely love Ky'an's anger scene. HOw he could hear nothing but his heartbeat and feel total rage and taking it out on Se'tra just made me happy. She deserves everything she is going to get.
I love Jake'her. No grey with him.
Saks is so carefree.

I am in love with the last scene in this beautiful writing display that was so LOVELY.
Is he falling for his pretend mate and how soon will the pretend part drop!