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January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You make my day every time youpost. This story is like a romance Yautja style. I love it. Awesome writing and an Awesome story. please update soon.
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January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, I will no longer expect them to lay in smutty goodness anytime soon. Just too many interruptions that will stretch on with hot interludes until readers are bursting into flames. With all this build up, please do not spare all the smutty little details. Hentai that I am, now and then. Great writing!
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January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I bet you have to air out that keyboard everytime you post. You are SOOO MEAN!!!! leaving us at weeks at a time. But it makes us want more. You are remarkable and an awesome writer. Get it on with Ky'an and Paula. What could Se'tra possibly do now?
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January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You know what I want. MORE! Paula wants him she will realize that. How can she resist him as smooth as he is. LIke Butter. I can not stop reading this you must hurry and added more to this fanstatic story. You know you are an magnificent writer.!
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January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think Paula's life is in mortal danger. I absolutely Love your writing. Paula is beginning to realize that she reacts to Ky'an the way he reacts to her. I see a connection but I am not saying anything. Again I absolutely LOVE the way you write and if you write anything else please email me; including another chapter of this.
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January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow.... More, I am in love with this story and your beautiful writing!
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January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please go on. You are making me tingle and I need more of this addicting story to fill my need. It is trully Marvelous!
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January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You do know how to make us beg. I am begging now that you update. I am so hooked on your story. It is very well written full of allt he stuff a Excellent story needs. You do it so well and with ease. I need more Viper in my diet!
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January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Bluflame, I hope you didn't mind me asking that question. I just want to repeat that I am really loving this story and I hope you update soon because otherwise the suspense is going to kill me...
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January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love how you write. This is so great to read. I don't want to stop but there are not anymore chapters after 8!!! (shameless attempt to make you post) You are amazing and I love the way this story flow. You deserve every review here. This is trully aa Awesome, refreshing , Lovely, Hott, and Sexy read!