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May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is one hawt and riveting story! But, sad to see you haven't updated it sooo long. I do hope you get around to update it soon please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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February 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is the best Predator story. I love your characters and the way you write. Please update soon I would like to continue with Ky'an and Paula's romance;maybe Grails and Mya have a scene or two. OrangePeelings
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November 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
More More. This was beautiful. I love this story I think it is the best in this section. Keep writing!
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October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YES!!! Long awaited chapter is now here. I love it. Ky'an and Paula are PERFECT. You are a master and I hope you continue to write when you have the rime. Please update ALL of your stories. ( not asking alot). Loveya
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September 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
EXCELLENTE!
This is fabulous. You must update. I love it!
This is fabulous. You must update. I love it!
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September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can read this over and over again because it is so absorbing of my attention. I can not wait for the next chapter. I love it more even if you do not update often I really do not care because what you have so far is so awesome it soothes the pain when you are gone. Keep this coming Leedar
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August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful writing! I think this story is heaven. I love it so. You are an excellent writer I love ALL your work! FAB
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August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
As usual this is awesome. I love it and I hope you update soon!. This is the best.
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August 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful. I love this story everytime I see it. I do not care how long I have to wait for an update it is WORTH it!. Hott stuff!
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August 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Golly awesome writing. I loved every moment of it! Ky'an and Paula are my new couple. Please go on.