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January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love how you write. This is so great to read. I don't want to stop but there are not anymore chapters after 8!!! (shameless attempt to make you post) You are amazing and I love the way this story flow. You deserve every review here. This is trully aa Awesome, refreshing , Lovely, Hott, and Sexy read!
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January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You are just toying with my emotions. I so want Ky'an and Paula together. This is my favorite story in aff. I love your writing. SO continue and update already.
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January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have been waiting a long time for you to update and you NEVER disappoint. I will tell you, I will be reading this entire story again simply because I love it and it is THAT DAMN GOOD!!!
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January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This just burns a hole in my computer screen. Giving me something Awesome To read this morning.You are a Fanstatic writer
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January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You enjoy torturing us don't you. Well I keep coming back for more. It seems Paula is almost ready to beg for it. I can only imagine, but soon I hope she won't have to only imagine. Simply hot and tempted.
Look out Paula cause Setra wants your warrior. Play dirty girl, if you must!
Look out Paula cause Setra wants your warrior. Play dirty girl, if you must!
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January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying this story and can't wait to read more. thank you for sharing it.
I do have one small question though, about your kissing scene. Do Yautja actually have lips? I would imagine that kissing a Yautja is very very different to kissing an Ooman.
I do have one small question though, about your kissing scene. Do Yautja actually have lips? I would imagine that kissing a Yautja is very very different to kissing an Ooman.
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January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very well written and very interesting. It's like one of those novels that you can't put down until you reach the end. I hope to read more very soon!
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January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great Story,
I'm thrilled to read it - it's wonderful
I'm thrilled to read it - it's wonderful
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January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Kehlan,
Technically Yautja do not have lips but they do in this story. It will be explained why this happened in either chapter 10 or 11. Thanks for reading and reviewing
Technically Yautja do not have lips but they do in this story. It will be explained why this happened in either chapter 10 or 11. Thanks for reading and reviewing
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January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your story is so well written and so Awesome I can barely wait for you to update. I love Ky'an and Paula. I am totally ADDICTED TO THIS MORE!!!!