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for The Viper's bite

by Malestorm

person Edison
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is so GOOD I wish you would update everyday. I can not get enough of it. Itis like a good book that I Do not want to stop reading no matter if I know what is going to happen. I love it and I want more of this magnificent writing.
person Symetrical break
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You know I need more. Paula wants him so bad she don't even know it. Oh flame you tease us so. This is Awesome!
person Verbatim
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
How can you write this way and your keyboard not explode? You are such a tease. Ky'an nedds the loving ; he wants the loving. Paula does too. I can not wait for the update. EMAIL me!!!
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HMMM HMMM AWESOME. You write soooo DAMN GOOD. I can not get enough. The flow , the feelings I get from just reading this make it IRRESTIBLE! More you have to give me MORE!
person shortest_warrior
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Make your move Set'ra, I dare ya.

I love Jake'her, he sounds like a cool old sexy Yautja dude. I can't wait for the feast.

Great chapter, can't wait for more.
person bodydouble
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Let me say I love you.LOL You are so good at this you could write a novel and I would read it because I know what you can make me feel. Damn this story will be in my dreams. You are so good.
person Della Bear
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What is Se'tra planning to do to Paula. Jealousy is dangerous and so is this your writing. I can't wait for my husband to come home. LOL Woah!! This is Sizzling So sizzling. I can not stop reading it. Please hurry and update.
person wydow
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am smiling from ear to ear because you are a fabulous writer Blu. I can not imagine what Se'tra is thinking coming to Ky'an's door to hurt Paula. Apparently she misses that hard flesh. You CERTAINLY know how to write. Now to the showers!
person Khale
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Waiting patiently for your update I will not rush the Master of Seduction.
person Bee
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Bluflame you defintely know how to keep a reader on the edge of her seat! You and your cliffhangers! LOL. I want to read some more Kyan and Paula! So please post again...soon...very soon.