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for The Viper's bite

by Malestorm

person Bee
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Bluflame you defintely know how to keep a reader on the edge of her seat! You and your cliffhangers! LOL. I want to read some more Kyan and Paula! So please post again...soon...very soon.
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You are so awesome!! I love this story to Death. Ky'an and Paula getting close and then getting interrupted only adds to this MASTERPIECE. Please update soon I will be watching and waiting.
person Amari
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
PLease write more I wait panting always panting for more from you. You are an amzazing writer and I see that alot but it is sooo true. PLEASE UPDATE
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Blu. Sighs You are so amazing you convey SUCH Emotion with your writing it is A TINGLER!!!! DO YOU HEAR ME!!! "You fight well Paula" *Sighs* I LOVE IT!! MORE!!!
person Deeplove
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ky'an is sooo Damn SEXY!! I just shake my head. I Love Jake'her I cracked up he reminds me of my Uncle. Oh Damn! Se'tra is now on the war path. I love this I LOVE THIS.
person Novicegirl
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH YEAH. shivers You know what..... Damn girl Just keep writing.
person Allure
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You know that I will be bothering you to update againt his week because I NEED my KY'an Paula fix. HOW can she deny him. I think he would have had her if Jake'her had not arrived. Se'tra is getting bolder. She still wants that Hard flesh because she can't forget it. MANNNNN!!! I am feining for this already.
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Bella. You write Sexy very very very well. Your story is NEVER dull. I read it often update or no. Bluflame; your characters run that HOTT.
person missy
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
more please. loving this story.
person Private Persons
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
DAMN! If this ain't the Fic I MUST READ EVERY DAMN DAY! I don't know what is. This thing is SEXY as HELL and Beautifully written, NEXT CHAPTER!

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