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for The Viper's bite

by Malestorm

person Mackrel
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is the most Sexy and Beautiful written piece I have read on this board. It is soo Damn Good .You made my day. I hope you continue posting regularly. I have always looked at this story but never read it until now. KEEP GOING YOU HAVE A MASTERPIECE THAT I LOVE!!!
person Anon
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Can you please update this ALOT!! IF you wrote a book I would buy it. I am so Hooked on this don't let me come down from this high!
person Anon
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please do this again real soon. I can not get enough of this story.
person Deverwood
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Se'tra will be on the warpath trying to get Ky'an back. Paula should be weary and I think Ky'an knows Se'tra well so he wants Paula to learn to defend herself. Grails is fast becoming someone I could love. You have made my night. Please continue to make them all this awesome with more updates. AS Always I will be checking.
person Harbor
schedule December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What happens now I need you to update please!I did!! Finally
person Symetrical break
schedule December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
He shut her down like she needs to be! My man Grails. I have got to say even though Ky'an and Paula were interrupted. Hmmmmm Girlie. I need more. I Love Paula's thoughts they make me quiver and laugh. You go on!!!!!
person karmaxp
schedule December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH YEAH. You know I think you have a book called how to be Damn Sexy written by Bluflame or something,cause I don't care how long the scene is it is SMOKIN!!!!.
Grails is my newest bestest friend I love what you are doing here and I am SOOOOOOO Happy to see you back.
person Private Persons
schedule December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Let the goodness fill me. Damn I love this story!
person scars lady 13
schedule December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
bravo blueflame is all i can say.
person Myliana
schedule December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am so happy that you continued this it is an Awesome Story. Ky'an and Paula are meant for each other and I don't care what you do to Se'tra She can not have him!.I love all your characters , your writing, EVERYTHING. I am a greedy person and I need some more of The VIPER