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I am so happy that you continued this it is an Awesome Story. Ky'an and Paula are meant for each other and I don't care what you do to Se'tra She can not have him!.I love all your characters , your writing, EVERYTHING. I am a greedy person and I need some more of The VIPER

I will beg if you want me too. Please update sometime soon.

Update soon or my excitment will wither and die. To leave us like that is just well....cruel.
Please cause no one really does anymore, and fans are in need here. Write something....soon....share?

I know what you will say why don't you update, but I am asking you first. I love this story so get on it Please!

Ky'an and Paula need closer dearie. Please update this SOON!!!!

I am begging you to update this. It is so REFRESHING to read I absolutely Love it!! I will be looking for this update daily SO PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!! UPDATE SOON.

WEll lets get it on. I think Paula wants it or she will soon enough LOL. You know that would be a mess if Mya started looking at Grails with that dreamy look in her eyes. I think he'd leave Se'tra in a heartbeat.

P.S On a side note, I have looked at others reviews and noticed that the reviews are sometimes the same. SO WHAT. In my opinion I do not think anyone outside of this category would care about how many reviews you have. Just the same I made sure that my review did not contain the word Sexy or Hott. Hey you keep writing I know A lot of people who love this story as I do.

I had to go back and Log in but I read it again and I still think it is Sexy and Hott so what if everyone else thought so too. Why did n't they leave there name? But anywho bring on the next chapter and I'll try noe to use any of the words anyone else uses. * rolls eyes*

*chuckles* Bring on the next chapter Bluy

I don't smoke but I wanted to during that bath scene. Them cuddled up together was nice too. More of that and she will beg him for it. He should tease her, make her a little jealous before he delivers. Make her ache for it Kyan. Great story by the way.