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for The Viper's bite

by Malestorm

person lil'bit
schedule October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yummy Yummy I want and need more.Is Paula going to give in? I need to know this is BEautiful and Hottt MORE
person Softly
schedule October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sexy, Hott and give me more. You know you want to . GET on it Excellent writing!!
schedule October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You are my new best friend it is a dubious honor too!!! THIS is by far for me the best story here. I LOVE THIS IS AWESOME!!!!
person Anon
schedule October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You know how to write. Blu you cannot leave it like this. I cannot believe you would do your friend like this. *sighs* This amzing and beautiful and awesome and all those other words of praise please CONTINUE
schedule October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Let the Beast out Bluflame don't hold it in. You are making me beg come on. I love this story!
person Artwzrd7
schedule October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
My little smut beast is rattling it's cage! Bathtime has never been more fun, eh. Great writing...simply HOOOTTT.
person Della Bear
schedule October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Shut my mouth honey HOTTTTTT MORE Ky'an is so damn HMMMMMM PAula girl she knows she wants it. You are an awesome writer!!!!
person Della Bear
schedule October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I had to comment twice because this is so good I love it. MORe please!!!!1
person zegra
schedule October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Blu You are awesome. This story is so Hott I am going to read it again. I love it so. Update soon PLEASE!
schedule October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HOTT DAMN!!!! if you are not one of the best writers in this section I do not know what. ABSOLUTELY HOTTTT MORE PLEASE!!!!!!