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for The Viper's bite

by Malestorm

person Anon
schedule October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah Love in the Afternoon. You know I will hound you if you do not update this ASAP. You ARE AN AWESOME WRITER THIS IS SO HOTT.
person Deverwood
schedule October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You are my favorite author I lovethe way you lead us on. KEep it coming. Let the romance flow because bath time is over. HOTTT HOTTTT
person Allure
schedule October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Blu Blu BLU!!! What you do to your readers should be outlawed. There is no good reason to leave us hanging like you did. This is SMOKIN' How I love they way you write let me read it again. Absolutely AWESOME
person INC
schedule October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You are so good. I want an update PLEASE! How dare you do that. This is so SExy Hott like all your work! I LOVE IT!!!!!
person Parts
schedule October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ya know what Flame I need some Ky'an and Paula lovin' Cause he is too sexy to let linger until next chapter. Girl you better get to writing This is so HOTTT and SExy and AWESOME
person Viewerfinder
schedule October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Totally HOTTT. Bath time is over Hell yeah. Dude Grails and Mya made in fic heaven. Lovely Awesome and Sexy Hott
person evoD
schedule October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
My get me through the day story. BLUFLAME IF YOU DO NOT UPDATE I WILL GO INSANE I MEAN IT, THIS IS MAGNIFICENT, AWESOME WRITING JUST AWESOME. sorry for the yelling.
person Harbor
schedule October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You are the greatest writer I know. I do not know how much that means to you but it means alot to me. I love this story it is Beautiful as it is Hott! You keep it going and going.
person Symertical break
schedule October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You know you want to write more? I have to have more PLEASE. PLEASE This is so awesomely HOTT!! I love it.
person Della Bear
schedule October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You are killing me!!! Oh I love this story so. Ky'an and Paula Hott. I hope Grails dumps Se'tra she does not want him just his title. SHe does not need anyone but herself. MORE!!!