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Excellent Chapter.
You do know how to come back with substance. I have been waiting for a while but it was WELL worth it. This was one of your best yet and I am waiting for more. I love this story!

This was Beautiful , sexy and awesome all rolled into one amazing chapter.
Look, I don't care when you update just as long as you do. This story is the best Bravo!

oh my god. Simply beautiful. I love this story. I can't wait to read the mating of Mya and Grails.....
Favorite line: "It mattered that a long, unbreakable black piece of material attached to his wrist and hers meant that they belonged to each other forever." How beautiful is that?!? Ky'an will never let her go. I hope Paula is pregnant!! I think Ky'an will be an awesome father. Can't wait until your next chapter!!!!!!

Amazing!

I so in love with your story. It is perfect. I do hope Ky'an protects Paula from what ever Setra is planning. I do hope that Paula is PREGO! That would be awesome. You are awesome. NEXT CHAPTER PLEASE

Oh, I really loved this chapter. It was hott and glorious. I love that your characters are not perfect and sometimes have the wrong mindset as Ky'an did to kidnap Paula in the first place. Paula probably felt that someone finally wanted her and did not put up much of a fight. She told him that much after she was hurt. I suspect that with all their flaws and problems they will find love together. I hope so I do LOVE them together and the way you write them. Next chapter please

I am so glad you are back with us.

I adore your story and I check this section daily for your updates.

This chapter was outstanding as the others. You make us wait but you do deliver A++ work. I am obsessed with this story. I will be checking again to cure my addiction.

Welcome back and not a moment too late.

I do not care when you update just as lons as you do. This was awesome. Your writing always leaves me wanting more. You are awesome and I love ALL of your stories.

Your story is breathtakingly awesome. I can not tell you how anxious I am to read more. Your story is bold and daring with its plot. It takes you along with flawless chapters that flow like waterfall. Each chapter just builds the excitement for the next. You do a masterful.

Your main characters are MARVELOUS!

Ky'an is powerful and Sexy. I love that he has a personality and not just some stiff creature with no feeling. He is not one to cross as Setra knows well now. I love that he realizes that he wants Paula and not just for sex; although, that was AWESOME! He has much depth that I caa not wait to read more.

Paula is a beautiful, funny, strong, Woman of color. I do not see many fanfictions with WoC's as the main character. BRAVO!!! She is storng without having to be a bruiser or use foul language. She can get her point across just being herself. I love her.

I love the depth of your writing. Please continue with this story I see no equal in this section. vineyard flower

If you are back then I am back also.

I have been waiting for your return.
This is the best. I love it!

Please stay and update AGAIN SOON! I missed you.

Love to see you writing again. This was excellent.

I do love the way you built to this point. I absolutely love the fullness of all your characters. You are doind a masterful job with this story.Not many story can keep me this anxious about an update like this one. It has me hooked.