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for The Viper's bite

by Malestorm

schedule September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ky'an is laying down the law. I hope Paula does nto hate him too much and learns to love him. I love HIM.!!!!! Grails should be carfeul around Mya so Se'tra does not get any ideas about Mya. Although , I think she has some ides I don't hink she will think it is serious especially if she is trying to get Ky'an back. I LOVE THIS CONTINUE
person bodydouble
schedule September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh how I love the way you write I love Sexy Ky'an and I hope Paula accepts the fact that thisis her home. They SIZZLE TOGETHER. Grails is playing with fire now that Se'tra knows he is not satisfied with her and is looking elsewhere. I see some potential problems. This is awesome and gripping please continue!!!
person lil'bit
schedule September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I need more I want to see how she reacts to life with Ky'an. They are awesome together. Love the attraction between them. MORE MORE!!!
person Walkingpapers
schedule September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have been waiting for an update this is Fanstatic. I love the hitch in the possible relationship between Ky'an and Paula he will have to overcome that to get her. Grails and Mya I lOVE it. Se'tra needs to be with Rah'fi there is a nightmare made in evil. Write more I love this.
person INC
schedule September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WONDERFUL and intriguing. Ky'an's line you are home was classic you are not going anywhere stuff. Paula will just have to cause him heartache I guess. Love them. Grails and Mya will be perfect if you can get Se'tra out of the way. I love this beautiful story next chapter!
person Della Bear
schedule September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Paula wont like that. I can see the heartache coming unless se'tra starts acting up which I think she will and I can 't wait for more! Great chapter keep it coming!
person WTLM
schedule September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YOu have got to have another chapter I wnat to see what Paula does now that she knows she can not leave and what Se'tra does because she could lose Grails to the daughter of her hated enemy. Oh yes this is AWESOME MORE!
person Granite
schedule September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this I forsee rocky, bumpy roads ahead with maybe more fights ahead. This is beautiful and Sexy please give me more.
person Greyson
schedule September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was Spectacular Blu!! Oh Ky'an is so Yummy and telling her she was home was like an AWESOME line. Grails and Mya togetherI love; but I think Se'tra has wind of it and I do not think she will let Grails go without a fight. I am waiting for what you got next.
person Deverwood
schedule September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
There is no end to your writing I loved this. Ky'an and Paula So good. He is going to have to work for her!! I can not WAIT!!!! MORE MORE MORE!!!!