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for The Viper's bite

by Malestorm

schedule September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have found another cover to cover read. Ky'an and Paula are steamy. I love them and I love this STORY NEXT CHAPTER
schedule September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Can it get any better Blu. Ky'an is so dripping sex. I bet he can make her want him. make her squeal with it LOL. I am HOOKEDDUG IN WITH ALL TEN FINGERS AND TEN TOES!!!!
person Cara
schedule September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yaay thanks for updating!
That was very hot at the end. Ky'an is so sexy lol.
MORE MORE please.
person Lina
schedule September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! :)
person lil'bit
schedule September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME!!!!! GIVE MW MORE PLEASE
schedule September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ky'an and Paula are smokin' I love this couple. This chpater was beautiful and sexy. Love it all!!
person Novicegirl
schedule September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is going to be my favorite predator story I just know it. This chapter was So Sexy and AWSEOME. I was hanging on every word. LOVE IT!!
person Amari
schedule September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
If you continue this way I will be addicted...okay I am already this is marvelous Paula and Ky'an are Awesome Love this keep it coming Bluflame!!
person evoD
schedule September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ky'an is so sexy I can not see how Paula can resist him for long. Heck I can't I lik e Grails and he has his eye on Mya and if Se'tra is not careful he is gone! I love this story and I am so glad you update every teo or three days this is AWESOME!
person vanthegreat
schedule September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hope she LOVES him as MUCH AS I DO!! AWESOME CHAPTER! I know I am yelling :)