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September 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh this is so beautiful I love the romance. It is a classic storyline. Oh I can't wait for more this will be a HOTT one beautifully written.
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September 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What an AWESOME Chapter. Long and Beautiful. I love it. Ky'an wants Paula and that is interfering with his plan,but I don't think he will care as much about hurting Se'tra as he once did. He wants Paula because she trusts him. I love the banter with Mya nd Se'tra I cracked up. Se'tra had better watch out or she will lose Grails. This is AWESOME More
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September 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I want more of this sexy, lovely story of yours. I was wrapped up in every word of this. I love the writing and this story. It is a work of art.
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September 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
My labor day reading materail! This was BEAUTIFUL AND SEXY!!!! I love the length PERFECT!! You have made my day with this beautiful writing you seem to put into every chapter, Ky'an and Paula are so hott!!! Love the dinner nachos LOL MORE MORE.!!!!
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September 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful and Sexy. This story gets smokes with greatness. It is Perfect Bluflame I don't want it to end. AWESOME chapter!!!!
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September 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love Ky'an and Paula they should MATE! I love the romance and that she is NOT all over him. He will have some work to do to make convinve her to love him. I love him He is DAmn Sexy!! Se'tra could lose everything if she is not careful. Grails has his eyes on Mya !!! I love this!
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September 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Heck Yeah I think I will read and review some more if you continue to write like this Loving this like chocolate ice cream. As said before, love the plot, the characters ,and the writing!!!!!
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September 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was Awesome and brilliant. Love Ky'an and Paula they SIZZLE together. I love the romantic feeling the love story that I can see in here. I can also see pain coming for Se'tra if she loses Grails too. Next chapter please
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September 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So Awesome this chapter! You made my day Bluflame. This story is the BEST!
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September 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH YEAH! I think I love them!!! THey are HOTT! You got something here Bluflame that is so AWESOME. It is my favorite and I ALWAYS look for it. Keep it coming yourself