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September 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I can not wait for you to update this. It is so Awesome Blu! You know what you are doing. Hey update SHOC Please!
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September 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love the chapter! I can not wait for dinner, Will he forget his reason for having Paula there is to get revenge. Oh I must know. This is Awesome Bluflame. ROMANCE YAUTJA SYTLE
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August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What a Awesome story to read to make your day seem not as bad. This is so refreshing a Love story. I love it and I wnat you to continue so I can have more Awesome stories chapters to read.
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August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love reading good stuf in the morning. I love Ky'an and Paula I can not wait until he starts to realize that what he is doing is wrong but Paula is SOOOOO right please continue this is right out of a romance novel. I LOVE IT!!!
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August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story because it is so refreshing and flows like a waterfall. Awesome writing to the point and not all that over descriptive stuff that makes a piece of work long winded and boring. I also love it because it is a love story between two species , well I hope so I love Ky'an and Paula "You know you want it" Update please
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August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Personally, I think this is one of the best stories on this page I love it the characters, the writing, thier personality have depth. The PLOT is AWESOME! It is a love story that I can not wait to read more of. Beautiful job!
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August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is marvelous. I hope Ky'an ignores Se'tra tomorrow but I don't think so and Paula will be forced to do something. I love this story and I want to continue so start writing.
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August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What an Awesome story. I love the plot and the characters! You have a gem in the making here keep going and I will be watching for this!!!!
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August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Paula is so funny. Interesting character.
I can see the makings of a very intricate, sexy, and downright hot story.
Please keep it up.
It's definetly a great story so far.
I can see the makings of a very intricate, sexy, and downright hot story.
Please keep it up.
It's definetly a great story so far.
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August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Blu I Must say that I love Ky'an and Paula's reactions to each other. He is sooooo sexy and she is too. This work has its humor and its pure dripping sex momnets. I absolutely love it. This to me could be the greatest of stories when you finish it. I will be waiting for chapter four along with others.
Hey Ajax and I need a posting buddy care to join us.
Hey Ajax and I need a posting buddy care to join us.