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for The Viper's bite

by Malestorm

person Granite
schedule August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I forgot to log in before But if you ever star a mailing list:)
person evoD
schedule August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Trully wonderful Story. I find myself reading it over and over and I will today. I love PAula nad kY'an oh They are perfect and HOTT! Love the way they are with each other. I hope she makes him take back every word he has said about Se'tra being better than her. He wants it!!
person WTLM
schedule August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am so obsessed with this story you can not miss a week of updating. It is soooo well done and awesome. I can not begin to tell you what will happen if you do not finish it. You are a amazing writer Bluflame
person Walkingpapers
schedule August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh Man! This is sooo Good I have to read it again after I run my errands. I love your writing.It is so Sexy and Fun and beautiful Keep it up!! It makes me Happy!
person Anon
schedule August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You just keep writing amazing chapters don't you? This is trully becoming my favorite story in this section . I so Love it. I wnat and CRAVE more. I WILL be reading it again so post on!
schedule August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and anxiously await for more of this beautiful story Blu! You are holding it down with much stlye.
schedule August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! Awesome! Awesome!!! I love this story please have more soon PLEASE!
person Payden
schedule August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HOTT STUFF. If these two need to get together Bluflame. If he thinks Se'tra is above Paula well just you wait!!! LOL Ky'an is too good for Se'tra what the hell was he thinking to be with her. MORE this is AMAZING!!
person Viewerfinder
schedule August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I need about 30 more chapters of this to get the feel of it down. Just kiddign but you can write 30 more. I Love it!!
person AngelaH
schedule August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so much I had to go back to the beginning and read it over t=just to marvel at the flow and how it is written I totally love it.I want to see how it turns out Bluflame so write on!