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August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am in love with this story. I have read it so many times since your absence I can not count.
I think you are an amazing author that knows how to get the reader excited. None of your chapters carry that lag factor and I think each one is brilliant and easy flows into the next one.
This chapter was awesome and I am chomping at the bit for more. Your are a marvelous writer. If you did not know it, then I am telling you. Even though you do not update regularly, when you do it is spectacular.
Keep at it let the muse take over again soon. Spider.
I think you are an amazing author that knows how to get the reader excited. None of your chapters carry that lag factor and I think each one is brilliant and easy flows into the next one.
This chapter was awesome and I am chomping at the bit for more. Your are a marvelous writer. If you did not know it, then I am telling you. Even though you do not update regularly, when you do it is spectacular.
Keep at it let the muse take over again soon. Spider.
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August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Even with though you were MIA, you came back with STYLE!
You have lost nothing.You still have that edge that sets you apart from everyone else in my book. This story is the top. It contains everything a story must have to be a masterpiece. I have to say it is complete. Do not let us rush you into writing another excellent chapter you take your time and do it right.
You have lost nothing.You still have that edge that sets you apart from everyone else in my book. This story is the top. It contains everything a story must have to be a masterpiece. I have to say it is complete. Do not let us rush you into writing another excellent chapter you take your time and do it right.
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August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Simply Awesome.
I love how you compose your story. This is my favorite fanficition.
I love your character progression along with your plotline. You are so good at this that I am envious.
I am a rabid fan of your work and I am all too happy to be a spectator and just read your work whenever you have time to update. Lorna
I love how you compose your story. This is my favorite fanficition.
I love your character progression along with your plotline. You are so good at this that I am envious.
I am a rabid fan of your work and I am all too happy to be a spectator and just read your work whenever you have time to update. Lorna
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August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was marvelous. I love this story.
I Love Ky'an and Paula with a passoin. It is the way you express them through your writing. You are great. Keep this ALIVE. I love it too much to see it fade away.
I Love Ky'an and Paula with a passoin. It is the way you express them through your writing. You are great. Keep this ALIVE. I love it too much to see it fade away.
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August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love all your stories. However,this, is my favorite hands down.
Every chapter is a step to the next. The flow of your work is flawless. This story has everything a story needs to be a remarkable piece of writing. Please continue to the next step. Lillybugs
Every chapter is a step to the next. The flow of your work is flawless. This story has everything a story needs to be a remarkable piece of writing. Please continue to the next step. Lillybugs
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August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
finally updated!!! that was amazing....update again soon!!
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August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Viper didn't waist no time at all. Sexy and touching. Down with Setra.
So you have a life! It has been too long.Kidding really. More please.
So you have a life! It has been too long.Kidding really. More please.
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August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Long time no see and you come back with AMAZING STUFF.
This story has no equal to me. I love every single one of your characters and their personalities. You are a master and this story is Awesome! I will be waiting for much, much, more.
This story has no equal to me. I love every single one of your characters and their personalities. You are a master and this story is Awesome! I will be waiting for much, much, more.
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August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is one hell of an awesome story you have written. It is trully amazing. Keep with this need to write and update again.
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August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Perfect and thrilling as always. I am so happy to see you back.
btw Towards the end of the story you have the word 'were' that I know should not be there. I don't think you will receive any punishment if you fix it. If you do not I know what you meant. The story is still Awesome!
btw Towards the end of the story you have the word 'were' that I know should not be there. I don't think you will receive any punishment if you fix it. If you do not I know what you meant. The story is still Awesome!