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Lovin' it more and more with each chapter you produce in this masterpiece I love that Paula does not like him in the sexual way yet that requires work on his part . HE , however, is pretty good at making her want it.! MORE!

Ugh. What a male. Use one female to tick off another one. Jerk. Even if the gold-digger deserves it, Paula doesn't deserve to be used as a pawn. Especially since pawns are usually the first to be sacrificed.

Ky'an likes her I mean when the body starts to tingle from someone laughing things AINT gonna be the same. I love Paula and I don't care if Ky'an used one female against another Se'tra did the same with Grails it's called Karma. But I hope Ky'an's plan has a happy ending Oh Please I love this alien love story!!!

Ahh Blu! This is spectacular! I love Puala and someday she will learn that he does not like being challenged about his sexual prowess.LOL Maybe he will show her a thing or two.LOL Alien nachos LOL LOL.

I hope you do know that a few of the fellas and I have decided not to post until you have Four chapters. Oh just me, Kraven, Kraven_Spider, Ajax, Malie and SafeHaven has not returned her email but she'll join us. Jacobs started this mess blame her she thinks your story is AWESOME and wants it to get all the exposure it deserves.Isn't she sickening nice. EWWWWW
But your story is Awesome so no biggie
p.s Some of us get time to write the next chpater :)

Paula is not going to be easy for Ky'an to make want him. I love her and Ky'an together. I hope he gets over his anger with Se'tra and moves on before Pual begins to want him. I love this story.

Love this story. It has all the makings of a romance novel only with predators. I love LOVE STORIES.

He wants her or he is just needing some female companionship. He just wanted Se'tra to be happy but she could not appreciate what he had. Paula is trying hard to go home. I love her no back down attitude. I can not wait for dinner w/ Se'tra. Love this

Oh yeah Ky'an is not a jerk. HE is Sexy and stuck on revenge at the moment but he;ll come out of that ...Hopefully Paula will help.

I love this that chapter was really really good. Se'tra is a gold digger. I can not believe she thinks she can just sleep with Ky'an again to make him want him. Ky'an does not look like the type to fall for that. He is DAMN sexy Love that. Paula is perfect for him. I hope she ends up loving him. Ajax

Oh, I really love this story and I eagerly wait for the nexy chapter please Hurry so I can read it before I have to go to work!