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August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is definately a reader for me Good work!
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August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is Awesome BLu you need to continue it TODAY!
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August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was excellent I love the plot and the characters. Ky'an and Paula are Hott together I can not wait for more please hurry
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August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey my fellow cartoonie, I have to say you are doing alright by my standards this is sweet to me, I love it and want more chapters.
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August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have a feeling every chapter will be filled with Awesome writing I love this and I hope you update today please
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August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I know You are writing Chapter three right? If youa re not please do it ASAP. This story is Fabulous and I widh to read more about Ky'an and Paula.
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August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The Plot is Awesome and I love your characters. Ky'an is kind of rigid and Damn sexy Paula is funny and beautiful just the sort of girl to bring him out of his shell, if Se'tra does not turn him back to her. I hope Paula learns to love him and he in return realizes that he loves her. Love stories always make me happy! I WILL BE READING THIS CONSTANTLY!!!
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August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Did I tell I was hooked on this before? Well, I am and I want more of these two. Se'tra will crack , but I think she will do everything she can to ruin Ky'an's revenge. I don't know I think Paula can do that by herself Love this NEXT CHAPTER!!!
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August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was SWEET!!! I love these two.I hope he does not let her leave EVER!!! Thanks and MORE
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August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Come you know you want it. Oh yes I do!!! That was HOTT and SEXY I LOVED IT. Dinner with Se'tra is something I can not miss!!! Fanstatic story!!!