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August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
DELICIOUS, I am ready for the next chapter now. Ky'an is so Sexy can I borrow him because you know you want it. The Alien Nachos thing was LOL MORE MORE MORE I DEMAND IT
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August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I had ro read it twice that is how much I really love this story Blu. I am so glad you posted it. You know I love all your stuff and the way you write it. Please continue just for me!!!!
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August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
loved this story...hope there is more revenge in store FOR Se’tra, she's such a bitch. Ky’an almost seems too nice.
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August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love the "you know you want to try it" line. I can't wait to see what happens at the dinner. I hope Viper and Paula step it up and do more than just wanting to try it.
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August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Bluflame! What a lovely story you have here! I love Paula, that girl has spunk! I love how she keeps challenging Ky'an about his sexual might...cracks me up....even though Ky'an can get pretty scary when he's mad! Oh and what's up with "She is far above you Ooman."....I think Paula needs to show him that she is alllllll woman...ooman or not! hahahahaha
This is a great story, I love how you made it a bit different with Paula not being a willing love monkey....he needs to work for her love! Love it!
This is a great story, I love how you made it a bit different with Paula not being a willing love monkey....he needs to work for her love! Love it!
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August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well I guess he can make her want him. I hope he does because they would be perfect together. This a MUST READ Bluflame I need more chapters
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August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
PLease next chapter Please!!
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August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a marvelous story and I can not wait for you to update more Blu. I love Ky'an and Paula like coffee,cream,and sugar. Please hurry and update this is that good.
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August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is great Please update
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August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am waiting right now for you to update agagin I will not post until you have at least Four chapters of this Hott and BEautiful story poasted. I love it so please get to writing