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August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am waiting right now for you to update agagin I will not post until you have at least Four chapters of this Hott and BEautiful story poasted. I love it so please get to writing
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August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent!! You need to update this this week I need my Ky'an Paula fix. I love the Plot Se'tra sounds like she is full of hersel. I Hate those type of people it has to be ten times worse in a yautja. Continue
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August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is trully awesome Blu I need another chpater to get th full affect though. I love Ky'an if he ain't dripping Sex eveywhere I don't know what is . Paula is perfect for him I love it!!
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August 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
THIS IS MAGNIFICENT. I hung on everyword I love it . Ky'an is so bad and damn sexy Ahh I love him. Paula cracks me up."I talk toomuch and have bad table manners." LOL I can see them getting together. Hell he wanted to. Se'tra sounds like a gold digger trying to make Ky'an jealous with Grails. I like Grails he seems like a likable Yuajta and Ky'an does not seem to have any dislike for him. I love this sstory Will Paula and Se'tra have words. Beautiful writing it is flowing and gripping keep it coming INC
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August 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
FANTASTIC WORK! Ky'an is so sexy and damn sure of himself I love that! I love this chapter Se'tra is a bitch to me. Maybe she will sleep with him for old time sake. PLEASE! I must have more I can see Paula messing up and all sorts of things happening betwwen her and Ky'an MORE !
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August 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ohhh.that was really good. hope she gives in and learns to love him.
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August 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ky'an Ky'an Ky'an getting everything you ex lover hates is a very good way to get back at her and bring her to her knees. I love him with Paula I can only see explosions when they are together. I love this story I think it is DELICIOUS!!! next chapter
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August 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hope they GET TOGETHER THEY ARE HOTT!@!! This is reallyreally reallyreally AWESOME NEXT!!!
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August 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah That was Excellent I hope she LOVES him HE is so damn sexy and confident. Please update again !!!
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August 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AWWW this is Fantstic I love it I hope they get together they are perfect. Please more this is Awesome