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for The Viper's bite

by Malestorm

person SyJen
schedule August 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT I Can not wait for your next chapter!! PLease let it be soon
person karmaxp
schedule August 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
If ...you... do ..not ...put up another chapter soon I will beg you until you do. This is so Good Blu. You have to give me more. Ky'an is so damn sexy he is dripping. Paula knows it, she will help him and I hope you know he falls for her in the process ,How can you not it is PAULA! Loving this terribly darling
person Della Bear
schedule August 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am so hooked on this story and I am really looking forward to every single chapter that you post. HOt Damn Ky'an is sexy
person Amari
schedule August 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
See what did I tell you your Sexy writing hand just kicked in I love Both your main characters andKy'an is dripping so bad the place is going to go up!! Great chapter totally exciting, loved it. Please post again soon.
schedule August 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You have a amazing and Sexy story going here and I want more. I love the characters and the PLOT is AWESOME MORE!
person Verbatim
schedule August 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YES!!! Totally AWesome I am into this story it is fresh and Awesome Please update soon like Tomorrow!
person shortest_warrior
schedule August 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ky'an is a wicked sexy male. Bragging that he can make Paula want him. I bet you his right. I want him already. Keep it up. Need to see what Se'tra does.
person shortest_warrior
schedule August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is very good. I especially like the big ass in the air line. That'd be me definitely. Please continue I need to see the jealousy and Ky'an needs to touch those breasts again. Love Ky'an.
person INC
schedule August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You must continue very soon with this it is AWESOME INC
person Kraven
schedule August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is excellent. Ky'an is going all out getting Se'tra's dislikes and bringing them back to stare her in the face.More please