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August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great start I love it BLu! You got to keep this going the plot alone says that a male trying to make someone pay for dumping them. Get to writing
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August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
More please this is soooo good. Love the Plot,Characters, and the story.
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August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So here you are This is so good You better update TODAY!! I love this plot you got Revenfge with an omman female oh the claws will be out.
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August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This little story of your Bluflame is SWEET I can not wait for Se'tra to meet Paula she sounds like she will be a handful.UPDATE!
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August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You got something here that I think is SPectacular with this plot OH BOY this can be SWEET!!!! You deserve all the reviews youhave so far please update to night I'll be waiting!!!!!
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August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please continue this looks like it will really good
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August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
More ,More,More That is how much I LOVE it UPdate
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August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT!!! I can not wait for the update. Wow!!! He is going all out to get revenge I see. I like Paula. GEt to writing MORE!
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August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow this is pretty good so far i will be looking forward to more ^_^
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August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like it. He is going for the jugular!! I want to see this unfold. keep goign and Welcome Blu!