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for The Viper's bite

by Malestorm

person Walkingpapers
schedule August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like it. He is going for the jugular!! I want to see this unfold. keep goign and Welcome Blu!
person Lorna
schedule August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey I am really looking forward to this piece of work Blu. I want to see Se'tra's reaction to Paula, who I like. Please continue
person chancelor22
schedule August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HHMMM. Interesting. Can't wait to see where it goes.
person Della Bear
schedule August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Me like this and want more to make sure Love the main characters Ky'an and Paula continue
person zegra
schedule August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I command you to write more Please. I know first I tell you then I beg. But please I like it so far.
person Leedar
schedule August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You know I'll keep reading this just to find out what happens. I think this is excellent Bluflame and I know you will add the sexiness that runs through all your fics into this one I can hardly wait More
person evoD
schedule August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Keep going this will be worth it!
person Spider too lazy to log in
schedule August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it and all the stuff that goes with it.So this is what you were working on Great start,
person missy
schedule August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
more....this is a great start.
person lil'bit
schedule August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
And this is EXACTLY WHAT I WANT go on Blu!!!

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