schedule
August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Welcome back! That was excellent. I can't wait to see what kind of crap Set'ra cooks up next. Evil whore, that she is! LOL. Till next time. =D
schedule
August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was a well thought out and written chapter. Excellent job! Let that muse take over more often. I understand life and kids come first and I am happy to see ANYTHING from you. This was Awesome as said before. WRITE AGAIN I will be waiting!
schedule
August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is so unexpected.
I love how your work progresses along. This is marvelous. Well worth waiting for.
I love that I feel the emotions between Ky'an and Paula. I absolutely LOVE them. Your ability to evoke emotions and feelings from me with your characters is unequal to me. I absolutely LOVE this Romance/Drama/Action tale you have me hooked on.
Excellent writing
I love how your work progresses along. This is marvelous. Well worth waiting for.
I love that I feel the emotions between Ky'an and Paula. I absolutely LOVE them. Your ability to evoke emotions and feelings from me with your characters is unequal to me. I absolutely LOVE this Romance/Drama/Action tale you have me hooked on.
Excellent writing
schedule
August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love i`t great story
schedule
August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
There is always one certainty with this story...it is always awesome.
This chapter just adds to this Masterpiece of beautiful writing. Keep them flowing Blu
This chapter just adds to this Masterpiece of beautiful writing. Keep them flowing Blu
schedule
August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love Ky'an and Paula you have made them so full of life they could be real. I love the way you have constructed this story for the 12 chapters you have so far. This is trully The BEST Predator fanfiction I have read. SH
schedule
August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this was awesome !!!!! is this the end of it? if so great ending but all the other characters were interesting to!!! so if the muse is thriving keeping going!!! awesome!!!
schedule
July 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is so amazing in its flow and chracters. Your writing is wonderful and I VERY MUCH want you to continue with it. I am hooked on Ky'an and Paula's romance. Awesome job.
schedule
July 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is so amazing in its flow and chracters. Your writing is wonderful and I VERY MUCH want you to continue with it. I am hooked on Ky'an and Paula's romance. Awesome job.
schedule
May 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please update I miss this story.