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for The Viper's bite

by Malestorm

person Deverwood
schedule April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome and I wait for you to update again soon I hope. This story is just too good to let fall to the side.
person Novicegirl
schedule April 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME. This story is my favorite Predator story. Keep ot coming please!
schedule April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hope you contiue this, I'm more of a Alien fan but this is great!
person Softly
schedule April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very Very Very NICE. I do not think Se'tra will sit by and let Ky'an fall in love with Paula.No way she will use all her powers of evil against them and I want to READ IT ALL! So UPDATE!
person bodydouble
schedule April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was VERY VERY NICE....

anxiously awaiting 12
person Deeplove
schedule April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A long time in coming Blu but well worth the wait, WELL worth the wait. Now I will begin the shameless begging. Update
person OrangePeelings
schedule March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What a Beautiful,funny,erotic,sexy, violent, drama, and romantic story that culminated in chapter 11. It was perfectly done. I can read the whole thing again right now.

I love all your stories. You are a wonderful writer.
schedule March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
THAT was long awaited and awesome. Do go on, I so LOVE this story!
schedule March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
thank you so much for updating this story....i was really worried there for a minute. i love it so much MORe MOre MOre
person Kasson G
schedule March 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love all of your work. This is an awesome piece of romantic Predator stuff. I absolutely love it. You are one of my favorite author's because I love the way you write and the variety of your work. Keep it going Miss Bluflame