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for The Viper's bite

by Malestorm

person karmaxp
schedule March 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lovely and Just in time. Se'tra is going to explode with JEALOUSY!!! I love this Predator Romance!!!
schedule March 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome job!!! I am so happy you decided to post. I will be looking for more soon. This is by far my favorite story in this section. It has everything you need for greatness.
person Anon
schedule March 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes !! Updates are a beautiful thing especially when you love the story as I do this one. That was awesome and perfect. All I can say is when are the babies due!
person Mackrel
schedule March 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Stay with us this time and never go away I almost broke down and emailed ya! I can not wait for more this was very nice please continue.
person evoD
schedule March 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so much it hurt when you did not update for a while. This is FANSTATIC!!!.I can not get enough of it.You are an awesome writer so continue writing!. evoD
schedule March 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Long awaited, Written with beauty... Perfect.
person Parts
schedule March 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Someone will not not like this but I LOVE IT. This is long awaited and well worth the wait Blu
person Payden
schedule March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was lovely as usual. You are awesome Blu!

I forsee a green eyed monster with a blade hunting for Paula. I also see her floating outside the ship if she does. What is Se'tra to do?
person vanthegreat
schedule March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You are a wonderful writer. I loved this chapter and I know that the Se'tra will be on the warpath probably from a distance while Paula and Ky'an are getting to know each other. Please do not go away again or let this groove fade you are amazing at this keep it up.
person Crazytail
schedule March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I feel it. Give me more please Awesome stuff!!