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for The Viper's bite

by Malestorm

person wydow
schedule March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think that was perfectly written. You gave it just what it needed. Awesome work Blu. Now let's get to the Se'tra reaction and what the consequences and repercussions will be.
person Lillybugs
schedule March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW! A Predator romance. I Love it. This entire story is so arousing . Chapter 11 was awesome. You have got to update this soon I must finish it like one does every good book.
person Myliana
schedule March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is not going to go over well with Se'tra will Jake'her make sure she knows it has happened. This was perfect, just enough and not over done. Loved it!!
person LovyDovy
schedule March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes, an update! We have been waiting for! So worth it! I so love this story!!!
person Allure
schedule March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You have saved me from begging you to update this beautiful story that I absolutely love. WELL WORTH IT!! BRAVO BLUFLAME! Long live romance!!
person AdamIam
schedule March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love the way you express yourself in writing. I love this story and I Hope you stay in this writing frnzy you are in because you are awesome!
person RedWine
schedule March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Do it again!. I am so happy you are back to writing this magnificent story. I was going to start harassing you. lol please allow me to see more of these chapters to this story very soon. FAB
person Edison
schedule March 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*Shudders* I want babies.... lots and lots of babies. He will be so protective of her it ain't funny. You are awesome girly.
person Amari
schedule March 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE the way you write. This was breathtaking I think. Please don't let us rush you to update. You know when you are ready and it is always perfect. MORE
person Coreena
schedule March 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LONG AWAITED CHAPTER. AHHHHHH MAN HOW I LOVE THIS STORY! You have me hooked. I am yours to command. PLease go on.