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March 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Se'tra is gnawing her arm off because she lost her Ky'an. Girl... that was *sighs* I need you to write some more while I print this out to read later. You fan INC
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March 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very nicely done! Now that the first encounter is over, I wonder what will happen... I can't wait to see! =)
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March 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I thought you were never going to continue with this story....oh how wrong I was.
This is Awesome. I love that no words were written just what they were doing and what they were feeling. GReat stuff. I want to know more, Will they have children?How many ? What will Se'tra do to try and hurt Paula? I have a lot more but I have to read it again. Della
This is Awesome. I love that no words were written just what they were doing and what they were feeling. GReat stuff. I want to know more, Will they have children?How many ? What will Se'tra do to try and hurt Paula? I have a lot more but I have to read it again. Della
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March 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I will religiously follow this story from now on. No more having to read two chapters to catch up. It is too AWESOME for that kind of stuff. This chapter was Superb Just perfect no talking just feeling. Loved it.
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March 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well worth the wait!! You did an excellent job. Beautiful.
I can not wait to see Se'tra's reaction to this development. I just know she will do something to harm Paula and I hope Jake'her has her floating outside the ship minus her head.
I can not wait to see Se'tra's reaction to this development. I just know she will do something to harm Paula and I hope Jake'her has her floating outside the ship minus her head.
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March 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Beautifully Done.
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March 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm with alot of the people above. I can't wait to see what Se'tra does when she finds out. Something evil I bet.
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March 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
thank you sooo much for updating...ive been waiting for this for a long time...more soooooonn!!!!
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March 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I soooo glad to see you are back....and back with STYLE. I know some writers have to get into a mood or groove to write. I hope you stay in this groove and it shakes ya because it is GOOD.
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March 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE update.....Please