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September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Loved the way you ended this story with going back into the past and having Jack choosing a different path. Should make the sequel very interesting and completey different than his life before. I must comment I Especially loved the part when it was described that Jack could not live long without Liv. Very touching. The next sequel with Jack and Liv having a second chance sounds very good and I cannot wait to find out if Liv feels the same way as the now merchant sailor.
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September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So sweet I almost had tears. I love the ending. Beautifully written!
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September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ooh what's gonna happen now?? I hope Olivia isn't gone for good this time...Jack would be so sad. I'm loving this story (just as much as the previous one) and I hope you'll continue updating, this is really a pleasure reading. I also liked your idea of Tia Dalma being the woman Davy Jones loved. That's very interesting... ;-)
bye for now,
blossom
bye for now,
blossom
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September 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wonder what happened to the reviews... *sigh*
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August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Two more chapters. This story keeps getting more interesting all the time. Good work and I cannot wait for more.
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August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thanks everyone for the reviews. I've went in a changed a few things.. same plot and storyline just reworded a little better. Sorry for the incon! Chapter 4 will be up soon!
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August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice second chapter. The short but sweet reunion was tender. So it's not Jack's time yet, eh? At least he has a guardian angel to look after him. *Smiles*
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August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I agree with Michelle, thank god its not Jack's time but aw that was so cute and sad all at the same time :( But I really liked this chapter, even if it was short lol. Keep up the good work. Can't wait to read chapter 3!!
Xox
Xox
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August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap. I read your first story, adn was blown away, and now, you do it again?
Man, anyways, soory for not reviewing before, but anyways, keep writing! Your doing a damn good job of it now, why stop?
Thanks again!
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-Teh Pirate-y Obsessor
Man, anyways, soory for not reviewing before, but anyways, keep writing! Your doing a damn good job of it now, why stop?
Thanks again!
^^
-Teh Pirate-y Obsessor
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August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice beginning to the sequel of Open waters. I'm curious to see what Jack will do and how far he will go to get his love back. Will Tia have the ability to do it? Stay tuned. I await the next chapter. *smiles*