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May 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AAAAH! Cliffy!! That was great. I'll bet James'll be mighty horrified when Jack tells him he knows. ^^ Cant wait.
One thing though, in the first chapter you sort of jump between a first person and third person point of view. I think it messes up the impression of the story a bit.
One thing though, in the first chapter you sort of jump between a first person and third person point of view. I think it messes up the impression of the story a bit.
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November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
holy fuck
did i mention holy fuck
did i mention holy fuck
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October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god! I love you! I love this! THIS IS SOOOOO FREAKING HOT! I just loved it! YAY!!! PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE THE NEW CHAPTER! PLEASE!
and...
Just one thing, um.. Can you put more details on the sex?Pretty please?
anyway, please update new chapter fast... I beg of you.
and...
Just one thing, um.. Can you put more details on the sex?Pretty please?
anyway, please update new chapter fast... I beg of you.
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October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Keep it coming. A new twist a Sparrington-I have never read one where james actually whores himself out. Very interesting.
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September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, great story.please update soon!
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September 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey, just giving my support.! I think this story takes a previously thought of plot, but twists it around to give it a new and fresh prespective! keep up the good work.
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September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
More!!!!
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September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The story concept is refreshing, and your flow of storytelling is sound. I am intrigued, I beg you to continue.
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September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is great I love it! What is jack going to do? What are those shots? I hate cliff hangers! Please Update!
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September 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap this is good! I'm hooked, poor James! Speaking of hooked, what is james addicted to, Lodnum, opeum?
I do have one little complaint though. I want more descriptions! Clothes, bodies and places. Great fic either way!
I do have one little complaint though. I want more descriptions! Clothes, bodies and places. Great fic either way!