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by sodapop0006

schedule January 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*howls with laughter at the idea of Elizabeth tied up in her closet*

I already like this story! The idea of Captain Jack Sparrow kidnapping Will to get back on Elizabeth is absolutely hilarious/great! I'm curious to see what will happen now. *grins eagerly*

Please do update soon!

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person Lord Localfreak
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*grinning and squeeing in a most uncouth manner*


Aaagh! But it's so good!
person lady_kail
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start. Makes me wonder what's coming next. Which is a good thing.
person Phoenix Red Lion
schedule December 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*giggle* That sounds exactly like something Jack Sparrow would do. I love it! I always wondered what he would do to pay Elizabeth back for that rum episode...this works great for me. *evil smirk* Not sure how Will will take it, but I think he'll adjust just fine. Who wouldn't with such an interesting and good looking captain.

Great job! Update soon! I want to know what happens next!
person acr
schedule December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great start! That's SO Jack! CAn't wait for more!
person tracy
schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh! I'm all tingly! I can't wait to see how this pans out
person ann
schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
More please? Soon?? *puppy dog eyes*
person cindy
schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like it a lot! Please update soon though, I can't wait to read more!
person vittani
schedule November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i hope to hell your continuing this. please.
person Phoenix Red Lion
schedule October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*evil smirk* Nicely done! I so hope you finish this cause I REALLY want to see what Jack has planned! Granted he is only going to be using that rum burning bit as an excuse, but why not! *snicker* He is a pirate afterall.

So please don't stop there. This teaser is great and holds much potential! Great job!