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for Return to the Labyrinth

by Gaeliceyes

person Anon
schedule December 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Gosh dang it, I love this story. Interesting twists all the way and so original!!
And Jareth -swoons- ahhhhhhhh!!!!
person Anon
schedule December 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The more I read of this story the more enchanted I become, you have weaved a spell over me. (lol)
person Anon
schedule December 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmmmmm... I'm guessing at some point she wished away a child?!
person Anon
schedule December 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I'm a moron. Izzy chooses to be mute probably due to the real regret of wishing away a child.
person Anon
schedule December 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Alrighty... moron lesson #2 here (that would be me being a moron twice); Roarke is possiblily the grown up child that Izzy wished away and she stays to serve him to do penance?
person Anon
schedule December 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ya know a long, long time ago I saw a movie on television where a woman is given three acorns and inside one of them was a dress and I think another one had some type of weapon, maybe a crossbow and I wish to hell I could remember the name of that blasted movie! It was also a fairy-tale.
person Anon
schedule December 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am in constant amazement at how wonderful this story is, it just keeps getting better and better and more intricate as it goes along. A BIG kudos to you!! I cannot wait to read more.
person lovebaka
schedule December 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm happy to see you've updated!! and early Christmas gift indeed for me !! you where right it was well worth the wait, like all good things. they are getting closer, but I'm think what will happen when he finds out who she really is! And what of Izzy? How come she can hear the call like Jareth!? so many questions... and such a long what for the next chapter!
person Anon
schedule December 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Sarah, if you don't dream you actually go mad. Is that what's happened to her since her dreaming is denied her?
person LyeLye
schedule December 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Im happy with this chapter at least we are getting closer to whatever mystery you've laid out before us. Thank you for posting finally, I have been looking in every day for updates and I was pleased to find that you had updated this morning. A bandaid being pealed away from your brain...That would be very uncomfortable. *winces* Anyways thanks for posting and good luck with the next chapter.