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Wow! That was great! I can't wait for more! Does she tell the truth for Izzy? Does she finally tell Jareth who she is?!? MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE!

WHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! *Deep breath* OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! Finally! And definately worth the wait! You paint the pictures with words. Its amazing! I can't wait for the next segment!

-Holly

There are only a handful of stories that I will never stop reading, no matter how long the time is between updates, and this is definitely one of them. There is just the right amount of everything in this story - detail, looks into the inner thoughts of various characters, tantalizing snippets that are just waiting to be put together. The interactions between your characters, whether it's Aisling and Jareth, or Twiggy and Nel, are engaging, delightful, sometimes wonderfully provocative, and certainly believable.

As for you latest chapter...I loved it, wished it wouldn't end. Aisling's new-found abilities are intriguing and I'm curious to know more about what Jareth thinks of them. I hate making predictions about stories, enjoy being led blindly by the author, but I can't help but wonder what it all means. I am fully prepared to wait as long as it takes for the next chapter to find out!

I gushed throughout this whole review, I know, but it's rare that I find a story so completely engrossing outside of an actual bound novel. I lose myself in this story every time I read it, am awed all over again with each new installment because it's just...extraordinary.

~cu-kid

It's so odd that I was just thinking of this story yesterday, and here you are updating today. I'm so very happy you've returned and with what a chapter. The plot thickens...if she can manifest her dreams physically things are going to get a lot more interesting for Jareth..or aggravating more likely. I do hope you update soon, I'd like to see how she plans to help out Izzy
Great Job!

JESS!!!
Where are you?????

ima lil mad.... *taps her foot waiting for the promised chapter that never came.*

Well October is almost gone...and there is no chapter 19. But I'm not mad. I'm a little sad since I was looking forward for it. But I mean you have a life, you do this for fun. I'll wait...and keep an eye out for you!!

Absolutely LOVE this fanfic. Labyrinth is my favorite movie of all time, and I love what you write. Please finish this fic, it is absolutely amazing. I am so looking forward to what is going on, and I want to know what amaranth? has planned. love it, plz keep posting!

I havent given up yet! I was just a little mad is all. Thanks for posting an explanation it gives me hope for the future, you are an awesome writer and i dont want to see you give up on this story, I have had so many stories just get given up on in the middle of the story before, it was horrible. X.x Anyways, im waiting for october! So excited!~

I guess you gave up on this, im very disappointed in you... Next time you write a fic or attempt to write a fic you should finish it or write something that explains why its taking you so long. Thats how you keep loyal fans that enjoy your work. Im sorry but hunny moons dont take 4 and five months! This is horrible, and it really seems like you just gave up on this all together.