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This the coolest Cinderella like story I have ever read. I want to know which one you are basing it on. I'm thinking its from something you watched and not from the original stories Muddy Fur or Donkey Skin, but I do love your adaptation. I love how you rapped it around the Labyrinth like a cute bow. Keep writing!!

just had to say this update made me soooo happy!!! loved it!

Wow. I'm fairly new to the fanfic world, but this is by far the best i've read. Absolutely top quality writing. A wonderful discovery among so many relatively uncreative bits of porn with the names Sarah and Jareth just thrown in. (Not that I don't enjoy my fair share of pointless smut :)
I dont know what to say that hasn't already been said. The way you've formed such a creative new story while keeping true to the spirit of the original and the characters as well is just fantastic.
I know I'm rambling and probably not very coherent, but wanted to add another voice to the chorus of praises!

Congrats on the wedding! I know we all have to be patient waiting for updates... but HOLY COW I can't wait!

I seriously love this story. It has to be one of the most beautifully written ones I've seen for Labyrinth yet.

I really love this story, and you have done so many things that i wished had of happened in the movie. For instance you had jareth tell that old man off with the bird on his head, those pair were annoying as hell. I cant remember anything else because im so tired, ive been reading this since early this afternoon and now its dark outside and almost 11:00PM I wish you the best of luck for your wedding and your hunnymoon However you spell that, and i hope that you will be working on this next chapter real soon. I love this story and im going to be bookmarking it to check if you have updated. ^^

Oh and sorry for posting twice, but i think i know what you based this off of, the furry costume. ^^ Jimhensons the story teller, where he tells of Sapsorrow. "She cannot marry her father, but she cannot ignore the law. Locked in her room, the princess says she will not marry until a dress, a special dress is made; this will take time and meanwhile she asks her animal friends to help her as she hatches a plan. Then another dress has to be found for wedding feast, but a third is needed for the church. All three dresses are made and the wedding will take place the next day. But the princess disappears and only Sapsorrow is seen running away, a creature of fur and feathers, the creation of her animal friends for all those weeks she shut herself in her room. Two years later a creature works in the house of a king, cleaning the floors of the kitchen. There she meets a prince. At a ball, where the eligible prince sits, a beautiful woman dances with him until the music stops." I thought it sounded like it, ive seen the story teller loads of times. ^^ Although in this case how you described her fur in my mind looks like the color of easter eggs.

Sweet addition! I love the old man's sayings.

Hooray! Another wonderful, wonderful chapter! This update made my day. :0) Things get more and more interesting... was the Jareth-doppleganger in Sarah's dream the same entity as the dark presence in the castle? Ah! It's such a great story! Thanks for the new chapter.

I absolutely love your story and I can't wait for the next chapter, but of course with the upcoming events in your real life I understand that it might take a while. But no matter how long it takes, I will wait for you *sobs* ...lol...

I really wondered on which fairy tale you based this story. In the beginning I thought as well that is was the cinderella-version with the three hazelnuts. BUT per chance I stumbled across an illustration for a story by brothers Grimm on Deviant ART. I liked the picture so I went and read the story and now I'm pretty sure you based your Labyrinth Fic on Cat-skin. Am I right? Am I right?^^

here's the link to the picture:
http://bluefooted.deviantart.com/art/Cat-Skin-69339329

Hello! I don't often leave reviews, but I felt I should let you know how much I enjoyed your story. It's an interesting storyline that I haven't seen before in the Labyrinth fanfiction that I've read, and very enjoyable. I find your original characters to be believable and likable (well, perhaps with the exception of Leila, but she's not intended to be very likable), which - in my experience - isn't very common to find in fanfics. I would really like to see this fic continued. I understand that your life is very busy and hectic now, and of course that must come first. But I hope that eventually, you will be able to write another chapter. It's a good story, and it would be great to see it completed. In any case, best of luck with everything! (Sorry if I rambled a bit... it's late and I'm pretty tired.)