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i absolutly LOVE this story!!! congrats on the wedding! please update whenever u can! i love how uve portrayed both sarah and jareth, probably one of the most original stories ive read, and uve actually kept them im character!

Thank you for a wonderfully entertaining story. You mentioned a couple chapters back that your story isn't Cinderella - I'm thinking part of your inspiration was one of the Donkey-Skin variants. If you haven't already run across this book, you might consider adding "Deerskin" by Robin McKinley to your list o' books to read.

This is definitely one of the best stories on the site. Please carry on with it to the end - I don't think I could bear being left hanging. Update as soon as you can!

This is, quite possibly, one of the best fanfics I've ever read--of any fandom. I love it so much, and your writing style is superb! I can't wait for the next chapter. X3 I think I probably check this story for updates more than I check my email! Don't feel like you need to rush, though. The quality of each chapter is TOTALLY worth the waiting.

Wonderful!

Amazing! Interesting originals and everyone in character. I hope preparations for your wedding are going well but we eagerly await the new chapter!

Just wanted to add my voice to the storm of voices I have no doubt are crying out for more :) I'm absolutely enthralled. Having only just discovered your story I'm trying to steal myself to not having any more to read for a while as you organise your wedding but don't forget us! Can't wait for the next installment.

Thanks so much for posting this. It really is brilliant, original and inventive, a great read! Will keep my eye out and good luck with the wedding. Don't wear yourself out too much ;)

I've just spent the past two days reading this and, after finishing that last chapter, all I can really say is wow.

Seriously, I feel like I've been struck speechless -no small feat, since I love to talk. Your prose is lovely, your dialogue wonderful and witty. You have added a whole new dimension to these characters and have made me fall in love with them all over again (can Jareth get any sexier?). I held my breath all through Chapter 16, waiting for him to discover it was her, enjoying their banter, the danger of it all, and finally remembered to breathe when she finally escaped. I love the suspense, I love the slow building of tension.

I hope it doesn't take you TOO long to update again, but, even if it does, I will be patiently and eagerly awaiting your next installment. This was such a joy to read.

I have to say, I love your story. It's built so well, I BELIEVE it. Characterization is well thought and the language of the story fits well! ah it's a Sigh and a half from the usual drivel that's found There and Here!

I adore your story!! Please finish it!