rate_review Reviews

Still my favourite Labyrinth fanfic. I like how you're buildning your world slowly.

the invasion of the BLACK SLIME!! was that sarah's doing or is there something sinister afoot? something jareth is familiar with because he only contained it instead of eliminating it.

the first lesson didn't go too well... i don't understand why he didn't ask to see the results of the magic she thinks she performed and her state of mind prior to it's actuality.

i love tripping through the imaginations of gifted and talented writers!

ciao!
ginny

I still check very often for updates and you don't disapoint. :) Great job another thrilling chapter, keep up the great work

it has been bugging me... yep, i misspelled 'waned'.

some beta reader i am!

sorry,
ginny

i can't believe this isn't getting reviews!

the story is really good and the imagry is spectacular... interest in the movie must have wained but never give up hope, this story will be in the archives for those with new and renewed interest to find and read!

yes, i am patiently waiting for your next installment.

>=)
ginny

eloquent as always.

ginny

One of the best Labyrinth stories I've read. I love the mix between fairy tales, faerie and movie. The story is captivating and original, and the descriptions are gorgeous. I especially loved "a stallion that seemed no more than smoke, but it’s hooves struck the rocky ground with a sound like steel". The characterizations of Jareth and Sarah feel like they are firmly rooted in the movie, but with an extra added myth dimension. The conversations are more down to earth than the descriptions, but they synch beautifully together, keeping the story firmlt between ground and air.

Thank you for what you've written; I look forward to new chapters!

i don't usually review the work i beta however i believe you and your story deserve even more recognition than you are recieving... therefore my review.

keep 'em coming!
ginny

I cannot believe that more people have not reviewed. Your story is incredible. The plot is such a different take on Sarah going back to the Labyrinth but it works so well! And you really made me feel thw whimsey and magic that you're supposed to feel reading a Labyrinth fiction. Not to mention that you actually have Sarah and Jareth in character. I love what you've done with him in particaular. He's every bit of the Gobiln King he's supposed to be. Excellent job. I cannot wait for an update!

Absolute genius! The first Labyrinth fic I've read, and I think you do a wonderful job! I really can't wait until he finds out who she is! You should update very quickly, because I love your writing!