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for Return to the Labyrinth

by Gaeliceyes

schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"Twiggy squirmed in her grip like a ferret on speed, but to no avail." <--Funniest line, and one that sentenced me to instant fandom.

Your story is the most original I have ever come across. Excellent writing, both spelling and grammar wise. I will be back soon to read more! Don't fail me now!

-AP
person Dazana
schedule March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! Lovely job so far....can't wait for more!
person Gaki
schedule March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY!! Finally a update!! I love this story and I really hope you update soon!
person luna26
schedule March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad you're continuing this story! Keep up the great work. :)
schedule March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
such amazing imagry, how real your words made everything seem!

there must have been quite a shift in the magic of the labyrinth to attract the attention of the king.

a rich and sinful reward for such a beautifully colored and richly textured piece:

::ginny's rum balls::

~grind up: walnuts, dates, almonds, raisins, pecans, coconut, chocolate chips(lots and lots)...add more sticky dates and raisins if not gooey enough
~mix in: mini-chocolate chips, 151 proof rum
~roll in ground nuts, cocoa powder, or finely ground coffee(hazelnut coffee is good)

because you don't cook them the alcohol is still there... warning: eating too many rum balls will make you drunk...

always a pleasure!
ginny
schedule March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh, i forgot!

if you need help editing, i can beta (i don't do lemons though)
general address on profile page, i will give you the other address if you contact me.

gin


schedule March 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've only read a handful of Labyrinth fanfics so far, but your Goblin King is what I have been searching for; A Jareth with balls. Thank you, thank you, thank you! Please keep writing!
schedule March 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh yes, he said he could be cruel *smirk*

the magic shift, your description was smooth, focused.

well played.

so happy you updated, i must find an appropriate reward for next time.

a pleasure,
ginny
schedule November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
it's been so long... i've missed your words =(

you were hinting of a ball? there are many preprations to make! will sarah make an appearance as herself, a sort of cinderella? it would be wonderful if you would consider updating soon?

healthy incentive to update... i am not above bribery >=P

::chocolate coma::
12 oz silken tofu
12 oz melted chocolate chips
whipped to a fluffy froth
refrigerate till cold ~yummy!

please, please (nor am i above begging)

thank you,
ginny
person Amalthea
schedule November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I am TOTALLY loving this story. Infinitely richer than most other Labyrinth fanfiction I've read. And I adore your use of poems and quotes for each chapter. It brings such a wonderful additional flavor to your story. I'm glad you have an idea where this story is going; I'm excited to see you get there!