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for Return to the Labyrinth

by Gaeliceyes

person gambit_gurl_isis
schedule September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very nice work! I can't wait to see what you write next. This story really has my attention, and it's so refreshing to see one that doesn't start off like all the others. Again, very nice work!
person Ivonne
schedule September 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You got me hooked!! This is very interesting. Please update soon.
person JK
schedule September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonderfully written! This is a great story, I really hope you continue! V
person JK
schedule September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oops, and that 'V' at the end fn that last comment does signify anything other than my cat running over the keyboard...
person kookookitty
schedule September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i am quite impressed and intrigued! i just found this story and i know you have just updated, i guess that means that i have to wait patiently (a difficult thing to do) until you write more. i will be eagerly anticipating your next chapters.

thank you,
ginny
person sawasdeekha
schedule September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, from a good beginning - it's just getting more interesting!

I wonder is this going to be a 'nice' Jareth or 'evil' Jareth story?

Anyway, looking forward to the next installment! :o)
person Leia
schedule September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
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person sawasdeekha
schedule September 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmm - Amaranth is nicely ambiguous!

Looking forward to the next chapter!
person ChaosProphet
schedule September 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i like this story. most of the labyrinth fics i see are childish without much of a plot. you have a very reasonable, plausible plot line going, something every reader appreciates, and you captured the general mental flow of a suicidal very accurately (not to mention the behavior of the psych ward nurses, geeez). keep writing, i want to see more!
person Leia
schedule September 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Mrph!!! Call in sick to work for, like, a month (at the very least) and complete this story! The Goblin King commands you! (This also means no play dates with the boy toy.) Hayaku, hayaku, hayaku! Or no Jareth *and* no Captain Jack for you...I will refuse to share.