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for Return to the Labyrinth

by Gaeliceyes

schedule January 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I love you! Haven't even read the new chapter yet! Just so happy to see you update!
schedule January 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
very awesome! So worth the wait!
schedule January 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
THANK THE GODS!
YOU HAVE RETURNED TO US AT LAST!!!

Surprised were our eyes when we saw that you had finally updated! Oft were the times when we doubted your return to us, and very nearly lost our faith, and still we kept looking for your return. We have missed you, ye of GaelicEyes greatly and celebrate your return with joyous rapture!!!

Now, there is one more thing to address...

Yes, my dear... Your punishment.
Due to the nature of your delay your punishment shall be quite lenient.

We Hereby sentence you Gaeliceyes to regular updates in 3 month increments from here on to the end. To what end only the gods know but there will be plenty to regret should you violate the terms of your punishment.

M'kay? ^-^
*hugs*

~Serenity
person Ephimel
schedule December 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I still Love this story and I'm still checking for updates. I hope all is well.
Faithfully, Ephimel
schedule November 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I was watching Labyrinth today and it made me long for your story.
schedule October 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
AHHH! Can we like contribute money to get this story going again? Because I would donate.
schedule September 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hello! I'm Sami, a long time lurker and a new resident to Adultfanfiction.net. I just wanted to let you know that I am in love with this story, and would love to see an update some time. =) I know how life can be, (and yes, it does suck) but you have a loyal fan for this story, and your writings!
Thank you so much for all you write!

schedule September 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am inlove with your fanfiction and i hope you are continuing to write it? AFF.net is saying you havent updated since '09 oh i hope you havent stopped with this story. I love it alot and hope to see more soon.
schedule July 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I remembered reading this fanfic a while back, and although I rarely visit AFF these days (I mainly look to LJ and rec sites for my fanfiction needs), I came back specifically to reread this and see if you've updated since my last visit. I am glad to see that you have. I wouldn't say I've read a lot of Labyrinth fanfiction, but I have read some, and this is the only one that has stood out as memorable in my mind. The concept is just so intriguing, and your original characters are so vividly depicted that they truly seem to be a part of Labyrinth. I understand that your life is keeping you very busy, but I do hope that you will continue this story when you find the time. It's an interesting and fun read, and it would be sad to see it left incomplete. I don't typically leave reviews, but I thought you should know you still have readers interested in updates. =)
schedule June 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness, you have written an amazing story, and I am so hooked. I started reading it yesterday because I was craving some Labyrinth fun, and I was torn between hurrying to finish the last chapter and taking my time so that it would last. I do hope there is another update soon!

And for a more constructive review (rather than just fangirl gushing!), you have really assembled a wonderful cast of characters and storylines, and not just kept true to the original characters, but developed them beyond what we all saw in the movie. Sarah has matured, and while Jareth hasn't really matured at all, you've broadened his profile and made him even sexier (is that possible?). This is making for such a riveting relationship between the two of them, rather than an empty sexual encounter that would likely leave people wanting.

I can totally relate to how busy your life must be lately (I am planning my wedding for October, and just bought a house on top of that). If there is anything I can do to help with the writing project, please let me know! I am studying to be an English teacher, so maybe I will not be useless? You have me hooked, my offer to assist is not altruistic in the least, but if I can do anything, please let me know!