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naughty naughty jack. :) i wonder what happens next... great fic!

I LOVE this fic. It is one of the steamiest fics that I've ever read, and Jack and Lizzie don't even make love. It is also descriptive and well written. You use correct grammar and punctuation. You are also no stranger to your computer's spell check function. But best of all, your fic is an illustration of the sexual tension that has existed between Jack and Lizzie since Curse of the Black Pearl. I enjoyed the wonderful give and take you had between them throughout the fic. I also found the exchange between Jack and Norrington quite amusing especially Jack's "I've given her a place to sleep, a bite to eat...the rest is up to her". I also enjoyed the teasing that took place between Jack and Lizzie starting with the pineapple all the way to the stolen scarf. My favorite bit is Jack's "Yes, you've been teasing for quite some time...and it's a very dangerous thing for you to be doing". You are correct (when you stated in your author's note) that I would never look at pineapple the same way again. In fact, I shall never see pineapple without thinking of this fic. That is the highest compliment that I can pay you.

your such a talented writer! please continue this story!!!

Nice! You should continue this story- it's so good.

this story is so beautifully, sexily done!

Ahhh! so good!