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for Out of time

by minniemay

schedule February 25, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Wish u would have finished. Well structured tale and good development. You have a penchant and talent for weaving a great build on story. Thank you I enjoyed my time.

person LyeLye
schedule April 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I dont really like this story at all to tell you the truth, and when you describe the encounters with lexi and sarah's old friends its like your just mirroring how sarah found them all word for word. Its very annoying!
person Anon
schedule March 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW Matey that was some interesting story. hmm and im very curious about what Lithan is up too. Also what happened to her father Dominic ??? I Really Hope you update soon and spread some light on lithan's plan.

Cheers
schedule September 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It so good to see you continue this story. It had been so long since the last post, I had to reread the story. I still love it! Please continue again soon!
person Emeraldfire
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! Please keep writing! The twins were a very nice twist!
person KriKriBird
schedule December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HOOOK!!!!!!!!!!!
person vixen
schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
its the line: poppies that make you fall asleep. that is from the wizard of oz.
person Supermanga
schedule October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, hope you update soon.
person Ox King
schedule October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey there, I'm enjoying your story. Thanks for taking the time to write for us readers.
person my
schedule September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You and your cliffhangers!!!
I love the story so far. I forgot how amazing your writing is. I was hesitent at first since as you know I usually don't read het fics, but OMG the first chapter I was hooked. You better get more out soon or I will make you watch Dir en grey over and over (not that it isn't a bad thing)!!!!