rate_review Reviews

Agggh I didn't review the last chapter cuz I was checking AFF real quick, so I'll make up for it in this review-
As always, you are such a brilliant writer. You combine unique, realistic characters in a very original setting with a nail biting plot (all those cliffhangers!!) and can't forget your humour! I love how the whole story isn't so serious, you keep the light things and heavy things balanced, really amazing. The only thing that keeps this story from being perfect (and it is so much, believe me!) are the typos. You have alot of typos, and I really hate to be a grammar freak but it will really help because they distract me. Do you have a beta or something?
I can't believe the C'jit chappie's ending...wow that little bit of erotica really got me going..dayummm. Haha I do hope you continue with their relationship, because I know Dom (just calling him that, it's easier) is jealous of Dy'ot'teka (forgive me spelling :(). I think there will be alot of UST following this chapter between Dom and Nala..and rivalry between Dom and Dy'Oatie.
Ehhh I have not yet read the background story but I promise I willlllll. I dunno why, I guess I've been saving it.
Man things are getting so much juicier!! This story rocks EM :) :)
Your loyal fan,
Cara

Ohp forgot to put in my fav parts:
The last erotic scene between Dom and Nala
When Nala said she thinks the hunts are a way of keeping the population balanced (or something)
When she battled the Queen
When she first met Lord K and the drama that sort of followed between them
The fight between her and the guy who insulted Allen (forget who)
I'm sure there are more great scenes but I just can't remember right now.
-C

I've waited for this situation to happen, but didn't think it would come about as the result of a dream.
Well Done.
Beautifully written.
I look forward to seeing what happens next...................

As for my favourite part of this story.........
is seeing the email in my inbox giving me the link to the next FABULOUS (because they always are) chapter...........
hee hee

Hah, wonderful chapter, and I loved the tie-in to your side-story about Nala's scars (and yes, everyone should be reading that one also) :)

I'm also enjoying the growing conflict between Dhm'Ni and Dhyot’te’ka. I guess now that Dhm' is thinking about Nala more and more than just an annoying roommate, he's starting to get jealous. Of course, Dhyo' has always made it clear he wants Nala sexually (which I've always found curious about him as isn't he supposed to be a "vicious 'Ooman' hunter"?), and even Thr’ik thinks of her that way too. I did enjoy Dyne running away like a coward too, I hope Nala beats his ass one day. Oh well, I can't wait to see who you decide to pair her off with first, because you have had the knack for doing something unexpected in that regard, like with your other story. :)

As for my favorite part of the story, well, I can't really name a part, since that implies that I enjoy something more than another, and I can't say that because I love the entire package. The characters and the interactions between then truly make this a remarkable piece of writing. Of course, I do hate to say it that even I notice some editing problems - mainly wrong/misplaced words, nothing spelled wrong - but given that you write such long chapters (a very good thing BTW!!!), even I can see how hard it would be to have to go through it all and not miss anything.

Oh well, keep up the grand work and I can't wait for future installments in both your stories, as usual.

Oh, it's cruel to leave it there. It's also cruel to have us pick a single favourite scene when all of them are so good, but I love the interactions between Nala and Dhm'ni. Funny, sweet, sad, it's all there. And I know it's rather redundant, but I hope you add another chapter or two soon.

Naughty to make us wait to see how they deal. Love the bath gatherings conversation. I like them naughty males too. More good stuff.

Holy Crapsticks!!! I so did not see that coming. As alwayz, awesome work. I can't wait to see more.

My favorite line from this fic is: 'She's not lost. She's just locationally challenged.' I do not as of yet have a favorite part. But hopefully, that will change in the future. :)

Wow,wow,wow......is always more fantastic!!!!
I love Nala and Dhm'ni,they are so cute together!!!!
Brilliant work,you are very good to write!!
I love too Sya and his affection for Nala,is very protective!!!
I want to know the secret of Sya,please.....
Can't wait to read more!!
I think that the new "the ripple of a stone stories" is very interesting...is a good work!!!
Please update soon.....!!!!!!!!!

hi,
so are you still going to develop a relationship between Dhm’Ni and Nala in this story or abandon it.