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I've waited for this situation to happen, but didn't think it would come about as the result of a dream.
Well Done.
Beautifully written.
I look forward to seeing what happens next...................

As for my favourite part of this story.........
is seeing the email in my inbox giving me the link to the next FABULOUS (because they always are) chapter...........
hee hee

Hah, wonderful chapter, and I loved the tie-in to your side-story about Nala's scars (and yes, everyone should be reading that one also) :)

I'm also enjoying the growing conflict between Dhm'Ni and Dhyot’te’ka. I guess now that Dhm' is thinking about Nala more and more than just an annoying roommate, he's starting to get jealous. Of course, Dhyo' has always made it clear he wants Nala sexually (which I've always found curious about him as isn't he supposed to be a "vicious 'Ooman' hunter"?), and even Thr’ik thinks of her that way too. I did enjoy Dyne running away like a coward too, I hope Nala beats his ass one day. Oh well, I can't wait to see who you decide to pair her off with first, because you have had the knack for doing something unexpected in that regard, like with your other story. :)

As for my favorite part of the story, well, I can't really name a part, since that implies that I enjoy something more than another, and I can't say that because I love the entire package. The characters and the interactions between then truly make this a remarkable piece of writing. Of course, I do hate to say it that even I notice some editing problems - mainly wrong/misplaced words, nothing spelled wrong - but given that you write such long chapters (a very good thing BTW!!!), even I can see how hard it would be to have to go through it all and not miss anything.

Oh well, keep up the grand work and I can't wait for future installments in both your stories, as usual.

Oh, it's cruel to leave it there. It's also cruel to have us pick a single favourite scene when all of them are so good, but I love the interactions between Nala and Dhm'ni. Funny, sweet, sad, it's all there. And I know it's rather redundant, but I hope you add another chapter or two soon.

Naughty to make us wait to see how they deal. Love the bath gatherings conversation. I like them naughty males too. More good stuff.

Holy Crapsticks!!! I so did not see that coming. As alwayz, awesome work. I can't wait to see more.

My favorite line from this fic is: 'She's not lost. She's just locationally challenged.' I do not as of yet have a favorite part. But hopefully, that will change in the future. :)

Wow,wow,wow......is always more fantastic!!!!
I love Nala and Dhm'ni,they are so cute together!!!!
Brilliant work,you are very good to write!!
I love too Sya and his affection for Nala,is very protective!!!
I want to know the secret of Sya,please.....
Can't wait to read more!!
I think that the new "the ripple of a stone stories" is very interesting...is a good work!!!
Please update soon.....!!!!!!!!!

hi,
so are you still going to develop a relationship between Dhm’Ni and Nala in this story or abandon it.

Wonderful, wonderful and more wonderful! :)

You certainly got a very big chunk of writing done in between updates with this chapter and the other chapter of side-stories. It still amazes me the level of detail you are able to put in your writing and how convincing all the situations are made because of it. And of course, keeping the humor in the story goes a long way to making it enjoyable.

Not much more I can say that I haven't already said, just that as usual, I'll be waiting eagerly for more. :)

Brilliant work as alwayz. I love these characters. They have so much life. I can actually see them going through day to day life. That scene in the observation deck was so touching. And I just love the little bits of humor you throw into the mix. There are so many great things about this story, that I would have to spend all night just pointing them out. Don't let anyone change the way you write. I live for it. Can't wait till the next update! =D