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September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
When I started this no one had posted anything and I see that I have posted over you and I am sorry. I am telling you to go ahead and repost if you want to I do not care. Lorna
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September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is brillaint. One of the best Predator stories I have ever read. Please post again soon!
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September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
don't worry, it happens. I do it to, forget that i wrote something one way and bugger it up later. the crappy thing is it's hard to fix. hmmm. maybe she got such a jolt to the head she now doesn't understand em? *shrug*
they eat human? blegh... we're so tiny and meatless! even sharks don't like us, we don't have enough meat to keep them going, so they spit us out. LOL. human balls. hahahahha...
they eat human? blegh... we're so tiny and meatless! even sharks don't like us, we don't have enough meat to keep them going, so they spit us out. LOL. human balls. hahahahha...
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September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter.
I just have to say, when you introduced the "human balls" My first thought was Prairie Oysters (I know Caz knows what I am talking about). Then I doubled over laughing.
I just have to say, when you introduced the "human balls" My first thought was Prairie Oysters (I know Caz knows what I am talking about). Then I doubled over laughing.
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September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nah! Forget about it! I like the story the way it is. I don't think you should change the whole fic just for that one little inconsistancy. Just change the part about the translator only being one way. Other wise, you'd have to go back and rewrite...what, like the last three chapters?! That's too much work. And, like I said, I like it the way it is. I can't wait for more. I really like this fic. It took me like 4 days of reading to get caught up. It was like reading a book. I can I have some more please?! :)
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September 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Don't worry yourself about getting booted off ff, us loyal fans (stalkers) will stick with you. The story is still really great and I can't wait for more.
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September 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I started reading this last night but I got sleepy, NOT FROM YOUR STORY I had a deadline at work, I think this is great and I am glad we are attracting all the great writers. Welcome to here :) and on to the next chapter
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September 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
We remember reading this on FF and we thought it was great and it will be even BETTER now. We are happy another has joined the ranks and want to welcome you.
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September 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Totally good chapter. Don't take too long with the update. We need to know how this fight ends. I think D's gonna have his butt handed to him with a good dose of humility.
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September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please continue please put more updates in the story as soon as possible I beg you pretty please with whipped cream and a cherry on top the story is wonderful and awesome and super too.