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October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, that was too good. Playing with his mandible, hehe. What next, tugging on his hair?
Kombistick through the balls (well, damn close), the look on his face must have been priceless. And leaving him stuck to the wall was just the cherry on top.
Now we want an update. Where is part two? You can't leave us like this for long. Come on, update. Update. UPDATE!!!
Kombistick through the balls (well, damn close), the look on his face must have been priceless. And leaving him stuck to the wall was just the cherry on top.
Now we want an update. Where is part two? You can't leave us like this for long. Come on, update. Update. UPDATE!!!
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October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hi just started reading predator stories and yours is one of the best i have read so far the only thing that is bothering me is that the more we get to know nala the more un human and fucked up she seems to be i am not saying that she should be cuddeling a bunny or anything but cutting someone into pieces and takng pleasure from it no matter the reason makes her into nothing more than a pshyco
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September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
When I started this no one had posted anything and I see that I have posted over you and I am sorry. I am telling you to go ahead and repost if you want to I do not care. Lorna
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September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is brillaint. One of the best Predator stories I have ever read. Please post again soon!
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September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
don't worry, it happens. I do it to, forget that i wrote something one way and bugger it up later. the crappy thing is it's hard to fix. hmmm. maybe she got such a jolt to the head she now doesn't understand em? *shrug*
they eat human? blegh... we're so tiny and meatless! even sharks don't like us, we don't have enough meat to keep them going, so they spit us out. LOL. human balls. hahahahha...
they eat human? blegh... we're so tiny and meatless! even sharks don't like us, we don't have enough meat to keep them going, so they spit us out. LOL. human balls. hahahahha...
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September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter.
I just have to say, when you introduced the "human balls" My first thought was Prairie Oysters (I know Caz knows what I am talking about). Then I doubled over laughing.
I just have to say, when you introduced the "human balls" My first thought was Prairie Oysters (I know Caz knows what I am talking about). Then I doubled over laughing.
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September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nah! Forget about it! I like the story the way it is. I don't think you should change the whole fic just for that one little inconsistancy. Just change the part about the translator only being one way. Other wise, you'd have to go back and rewrite...what, like the last three chapters?! That's too much work. And, like I said, I like it the way it is. I can't wait for more. I really like this fic. It took me like 4 days of reading to get caught up. It was like reading a book. I can I have some more please?! :)
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September 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Don't worry yourself about getting booted off ff, us loyal fans (stalkers) will stick with you. The story is still really great and I can't wait for more.
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September 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I started reading this last night but I got sleepy, NOT FROM YOUR STORY I had a deadline at work, I think this is great and I am glad we are attracting all the great writers. Welcome to here :) and on to the next chapter
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September 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
We remember reading this on FF and we thought it was great and it will be even BETTER now. We are happy another has joined the ranks and want to welcome you.