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September 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Totally good chapter. Don't take too long with the update. We need to know how this fight ends. I think D's gonna have his butt handed to him with a good dose of humility.
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September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please continue please put more updates in the story as soon as possible I beg you pretty please with whipped cream and a cherry on top the story is wonderful and awesome and super too.
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September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Welcome to the adult side. Now we don't have to worry about the story being pulled for being a little too risque.
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September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well we are our worst critique, because your first chapter was great! I love your detail. Ok, going to go read more now!